ULTRAVIOLET
Ultraviolet she is a girl that this(this one) destined to defend the future his(her,your) special power are: beams laser and to fly. It(he,she) defends itself with two weapon, razors, accompanies a sword, also it(he,she) does pirouettes.
The suit of ultraviolet is a blouse and a trousers as style of plastic red color and a few glasses, his(her,your) hairdo is a simple hair to half a back, black and fringe the future this one suffering for a virus and the humanity this dividad in two gurpos human beings and counterparts to ultraviolet he(she) has to fight against it
Great job Laura! I'm so happy to see that you are using the blog! Here are my corrections:
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Ultraviolet (she) is a girl that (this(this one)) IS destined to defend the future. HER (his(her,your)) special powerS are: LASER beams (laser) and (to) flyING. (It) SHE defends (itself)HERSELF with two weaponS - razors accompanieD BY a sword - AND SHE also ( it(he,she)) does pirouettes.
(The suit of) Ultraviolet'S SUIT is a blouse and (a) PLASTIC RED COLOURED trousers (as style of plastic red color) and a few glasses (??). HER ( his(her,your)) hairdo is (a) simple: BLACK hair (to) halfWAY DOWN HER (a) back, (black) and fringe. IN the future (this one) THE WORLD IS suffering for a virus and (the) humanity (this) IS dividad in two (gurpos)GROUPS: human beings and counterparts (to)THAT ultraviolet (he(she)) has to fight against (it).